Daily DeviationGiven 2008-07-28
I was lying in bed, with a feeling of dread, for a demon seemed lurking about.
I dove under the covers, for fear there be others, in a dark that was freaking me out.
Though they all remained quiet, I just wouldn't buy it, I could feel their presence was there.
And trembling in suspense, with panic so intense, I just waited for a bone-chilling scare.
Intolerant of the shaking and in a risk that was worth taking, I jumped up an switched on the light.
Out the window they all flew, because all of them knew, they could only be of terror in the night.
That and maybe use some more cold tones, this is a very warm and inviting shot (especially when you don't see the monster arms in a preview such as facebook) adding some cool blues or greens will really dank (creep) up the scene.
Just my two cents. Great work!!!
I like this!
It somehow makes something
that wasn't too bad to begin with
just absolutely terrible, y'know?
Awesome piece! But awful nonetheless.
I loved that book though, cause every time he fell asleep he'd woke up as someone else, or, something else.